Romeo and Juliet – My Treatment of Scenes 1.1 and 2.6

Setting

In a busy city, Bark Angles with thiefs ,bone snatchers , and catnip dealers.This busy town has it all not to mention tall dog houses and cat posts. Not only being a dangerous territory it has the blood of the past  ancestors.This city has been here for years and even survived The Great Depression in pet history. Lifes are harsh and only for the wealthy to live normal.Lower class just take the scraps from the higher class.Also money is recievied by catnip dealing, bone selling,and taxes.

Time Period

This story was placed in 2013 or today

House of the Capulet

The Capulet clan are a pack of fancy cats that run half of the city.Although, they are feared , tough and they pop off at any minute. They want to to claw their way to the top and won’t let any get in their way. These victorious cats live in a beautiful cat post with a pool which they don’t use ( cats don’t like bathes).They run catnip deals and sales them in the in dark parts of the city. Those who sell them are called Alley Cats. The Capulets are also called Catulet by the Montagues , but called the Muttages by the Capulets. These felines are the best at their work and live luxury. They want to be at the top and go against the Montagues !

Juliet

Juliet or Jaguar is a graceful all white cat with long claws. She has her mother beauty and her father full breed attitude. she loves poetry, salmon, and fancy cat bowls. she is 2( which in human years 20) .She is the daughter of Lady Capulet and Lord Capulet. They love her with all of heart because of her miracle being the only kitten bore by Lady Capulet. Juliet wants to be with Romeo  and never doesn’t want to be apart for him.

House of Montague

Unlike the Capulets , these dog sell bones , their wealth come for these bones .Additionally, they are 50 doggie buck per bone .The Montagues or Muttagues lived in this city for hundreds of years and battled the Capulets for the same amount of years . They are known for their brave and bold moves against the Catulets but are known for being impatient and territorial making. The highest of the family is Alpha Montague and his wife Pooch Montague. Also, other canines make up the rest of the family. The Montages are tied with the Capulets at selling product for the city. Also, wants to run the city by themself.

Romeo

Romeo or Rover is 2 (which in human years 20).He wants to be a  dog not a puppy and wants to grow up. Though, his parents treat him like a baby, his doesn’t want his relationship with Juliet to end. Romeo keeps his distance from his parents and his parent love him too much like always wanting to know all of his actions and were he is at. He is a important to his family because if his father dies Romeo takes over.Romeo is a pure breed dog , he has all black fur unlike Juliet.

The Play

Prologue

The 3 members of the Thunder Bird gang are flying . The setting is at the Bark Bark Park Present day.

Jim Crow

In Bark Angles, two clans that run this city fight for nonsense, but when the death of star cross mates they stop. How did they feel. What is their reflection. Who was the blame .First lets see what happen………

 Act 1 Scene 1.1

In Bark Angles, Sampson and Gregory walking down a street, full-bark

Sampson

Hey, we have the cat in the bag.

Gregory

And If we didnt  nobody will respect us.

Sampson

And if anyone want to make me mad Ill just scratch them in the face pussy cat style.

Gregory.

Ok, big cat

 Sampson

Ok, nothing

Gregory

We will see , here comes a  Muttague.

Abram & another Montague servant enter, all bark and bite

Gregory

Come on,scratch them like you said.

Sampson

OK, have my back and witness the greatest scratch ever.

Sampson

First I’ll mad these mutts mad ,Ill pull his tail while he isn’t looking watch him do nothing.

Abram

WOOF WOOF, who pulled my tail was it you , feline?

Sampson

Mutt, I pulled a tail but it may or may have not been yours.

Abram

What, you did you pull my tail?

Sampson

Uh, will I be put in jail if I say so?

Gregory

Yes

Sampson

Then, no sir i didn’t your pull tail.

Gregory

Sir, are you threatening us cause we didn’t do nothing.

Abram

No, I’m trying to find out who pulled my tail.

Sampson

Well, then I threaten you.

Abram

ha , pussy cat dares me.

Sampson

Well, sir—

sees Tybalt coming; to Sampson

Gregory

Here comes my fellow feline

Sampson

Yes , sir

Abram

Stop joking

Sampson

You think I’m  joking ,while i wont be joking when you remember that mark upon your cheek.

Abram

What mark

Sampson

This one!

Sampson scratches him on his cheek and they fight

Benvolio enters, barking

Benvolio

Bark ! We can’t keep doing this, we’re all gonna be in jail!

Tybalt enters.

Tybalt

How can you say that with loud bark , mutt

Benvolio

Hey cat I’m just trying to stop all of this

Tybalt

You keep say you want peace with your hideous bark , this is why I hate dogs as I hate you Muttagues.

They fight.

Citizens 

Beat all these cats and dogs down.

LORD & LADY CAPULET and LORD & LADY MONTAGUE enter

Capulet

What is this craziness, I’ll scratch them up.

LADY CAPULET

Ha, not with those claws.

Capulet

Be quite ,I have to put down order.

Montague

So stupid, I’ll bark and bite.

LADY MONTAGUE

No, not like last time.

Prince

All you do is disturb the peace , ruin the city , and start troubles. Even though you are oldest in these city, you aren’t no wiser than the Thunderbird gang. It both of your fault with all these stupid cat fights and dog brawls , you beast even with 3 civil brawl you still cant stop. Catulet  , you stay and Muttague came back later. Everybody else LEAVE!

Montague

Who did it?

Benvolio

The Catulet started these time and as I was going to break them up , but Tybalt started a brawl with me and we fought then as you recall the prince broke it up.

Lady Montague

Have you seen Rover today?

Benvolio

Early in the morning , he was taking a long walk without the leash in Bark Bark park

I tried to catch up but he ran away , he looked sad.

Montague

He spends all day in his room in the dark licking himself , didn’t think pups like him reach that phase yet .

Benvolio

Excuse me, I don’t think he is still a pup,  he is practically a grown dog.

ROMEO enters

Benvolio

I’ll talk to the pup for you.

Montague

Lets go it smells like fish from the cats !

They Leave

Benvolio

Whats wrong , squirt

Benvolio

Did someone take your bone?

Romeo

no

Benvolio

Did the Capulets scratch you like last time?

Romeo

no

Benvolio

Are you in love ?

Romeo

NO!

Benvolio

Are you sure?

Romeo

Yes well out of love

Benvolio

Why cuz

Romeo

Well, out of my little mind of the one I love

Love is blindfolded and you don’t known who you will fall for

Love is mysterious, all the time its about hate lets have more love wars, battle and almost everyday hat more love

BARK!  are you gonna laugh cuz ?

Benvolio

Yes, I am ,HA HA HA……….

Romeo

Why do laugh cuz?

Benvolio

Cause it funny and your kinda not making it funny anymore cause your sad Romeo.

Romeo

It’s not my fault

It’s love fault

But its keeping me happy I’m sorry if I’m bringing you down

Bye cuz

Benvolio

Hey I’m coming with you

Romeo

Sorry, I’m not feeling myself today.

Benvolio

Now Now who is this mistress?

Romeo

Why you laugh at me you ,mixed breed ?

Benvolio

Most likely I will cheer you up and get you out of your feelings , mutt.

Romeo

OK , one hint she is beautiful and i love her

Benvolio

I bet you won’t say that to the other female dogs that we will find.

Romeo

Ok , you can try

They Leave

Act 2, Scene 2.6

Church, afternoon. FRIAR & ROMEO

FRIAR

May the human pet our heads on this beautiful act and doesn’t scold us later.

Romeo

True , what ever will happen to up won’t ruin what I have with Juliet , it even gives me joy when I call her name.

FRIAR

Soon all these brawls will end.

JULIET enters in a rush and embraces ROMEO

FRIAR

Here is the lady light and joyful as she is.

JULIET

Good evening
Friar
 Romeo will thank us both
Juliet
I will thank him so we are even

Romeo

As long as you are as happy as I am I’m cool
Juliet
Well,my love is so much for you it is rich and I can’t even count my wealth!

FRIER

Ok ,lets get this job done I’m not leaving you two alone until you are united by marriage.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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One Response to “Romeo and Juliet – My Treatment of Scenes 1.1 and 2.6”

  1. Mr. Clements
    Mr. Clements
    November 19, 2013 at 8:28 pm #

    20 pts: 14

    5: formatting headers: 3/5 (missing a comma in your scene header, one header isn’t formatted at all)
    5: following instructions: 3/5 (too much space at the end – missing most of your second scene)
    5: quality: 3/5 – comma errors, run on sentences, nonsensical sentences
    5: metadata (title, cats, etc.): 5/5

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